Analysis of Immortality



At twenty-five I cast my horoscope,
   And saw a future with all good things rife --
   A firm assurance of eternal life
In worlds beyond, and in this world the hope
Of deathless fame. But now my sun doth slope
   To setting, and the toil of sordid strife,
   The care of food and raiment, child and wife,
Have dimmed and narrowed all my spirit's scope.

Eternal life -- a river gulphed in sands!
   Undying fame -- a rainbow lost in clouds!
   What hope of immortality remains
But this: "Some soul that loves and understands
   Shall save thee from the darkness that enshrouds";
   And this: "Thy blood shall course in others' veins"?


Scheme ABBAABBA CXDCCD
Poetic Form
Metre 110111110 0101011111 0101010101 0101001101 111111111 1100011101 011101101 1101011101 0101010101 010101101 111010001 111111001 111101011 0111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 642
Words 113
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 6
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 237
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John Liddell Kelly

John Liddell Kelly (19 February 1850 – 10 December 1925) was a British journalist and poet. more…

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