Analysis of You know what I mean



I’VE noticed this happen, when everything is black,
When I’m down below zero and cannot get back,
When I feel like a sort of a National Debt,
That will go on for ages and never be met,
When my will is all bagged at the knees and dead beat,
It is then, don’t you know, that., I’m certain to meet
With some prodigal lifeless dejected old bean,
Who is worse off than I you know what I mean.
Someone or other who’s entered the race,
With a sense of intention but can’t stay the pace,
He tells all his troubles and heaven knows what,
Talks about Fate and all that sort of rot,
And it makes all my own little troubles look small,
Till I find I’ve no cause to be worried at all,
And it doesn’t seem cricket to grouse when I’ve seen,
That he’s worse off than I you know what I mean.

No matter how hard one may fall down the hill,
There’s always a somebody lower down still,
And it makes you feel well, it seems mean to repeat,
All your own little troubles to people you meet.
One learns in the end, that self pity’s a curse,
And to talk of your cares only makes them seem worse.
It takes courage to stand where it’s easy to lean,
But it makes you feel better you know what I mean.

The chap we all like is the chap who can smile,
Though his heart may be breaking with sorrow the while,
He just keeps them all secretly locked in his breast,
Keep’s the worm to himself, gives the world of his best.
He has losses like we have, yet never gives in,
But goes silently back to his task with a grin.
And the lesson we learn from this priceless old being,
Is to smile all the while with some laughs in between.
Though you’re empty and broke, meet your fate with a joke,
For the sake of the folk who can’t see what you mean
And it may be in turn even they will yet learn,
And they’ll smile all the while when they see what you mean.
Do you get me? Ah well that’s what I mean.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011011011 111011001011 111101101001 111111001011 111111101011 111111111011 111001001011 11111111111 111011001 101101011101 11111001011 1011011111 011111101011 111111111011 01111011111 11111111111 11011111101 110101011 011111111101 111101011011 1100111101 011111101111 111011111011 111111011111 01111101111 111111011001 111111001011 101101101111 111011111010 111001111101 0010111110110 111101111001 111001111101 101101111111 011101101111 011101111111 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,868
Words 375
Sentences 13
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 16, 8, 13
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 474
Words per stanza (avg) 124
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:52 min read
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John Milton Hayes

John Milton Hayes is better known as J Milton Hayes he was an English actor and poet best known for his 1911 dramatic monologue The Green Eye of the Yellow God more…

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