Analysis of St. Laurence

Joyce Kilmer 1886 (New Brunswick) – 1918 (Seringes-et-Nesles)



Within the broken Vatican
 The murdered Pope is lying dead.
The soldiers of Valerian
 Their evil hands are wet and red.

Unarmed, unmoved, St. Laurence waits,
 His cassock is his only mail.
The troops of Hell have burst the gates,
 But Christ is Lord, He shall prevail.

They have encompassed him with steel,
 They spit upon his gentle face,
He smiles and bleeds, nor will reveal
 The Church's hidden treasure-place.

Ah, faithful steward, worthy knight,
 Well hast thou done. Behold thy fee!
Since thou hast fought the goodly fight
 A martyr's death is fixed for thee.

St. Laurence, pray for us to bear
 The faith which glorifies thy name.
St. Laurence, pray for us to share
 The wounds of Love's consuming flame.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Quatrain 
Metre 01010100 01011101 01010100 11011101 01011101 11011101 01111101 11111101 11010111 11011101 11011101 01010101 11010101 11110111 11110101 0111111 11011111 0111011 11011111 01110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 704
Words 124
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joyce Kilmer

Joyce Kilmer was an American writer and poet mainly remembered for a short poem titled "Trees", which was published in the collection Trees and Other Poems in 1914. more…

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