Analysis of Going, Going, Gone



Going, Going, Gone
by Jean Martin

It stood there in a thicket of trees,
Only disturbed by the drone of bees,
Filled with years of memories,
Going, going, gone.

How many years did I watch the sunrise?
There on the porch, through sleepy eyes?
Watching Canadian geese fly by?
                                           Going, going, gone.

Our one hundred-year-old house was fit,
Our children played in front of it,
Memories that I will not forget,
Going, going, gone.

Someone came to our hometown,
Chopped the thicket of our trees down,
Leveled our farmhouse to the ground,
Going, going, gone.

Never gave thought to how many years,
Of toil and sweat, of joy and tears,
Of pain and sorrow, courage and fears,
Going, going, gone.

Wantonly they destroyed our land,
As if it all were made of sand,
Here where our heritage stands,
Going, going, gone.

Large sums of money changed hands one day,
Someone took our life away,
But in my heart it will always stay,
Though it’s going, going……….gone.


Scheme Ax bbbA ccxA ddxA eexA fxfA ggxA hhha
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101 1110 111001011 100110111 1111100 10101 110111101 11011101 100100111 10101 1011011111 101010111 100111101 10101 111101 101011011 10101101 10101 101111101 11011101 110101001 10101 100101101 11110111 11101001 10101 111101111 1110101 10111111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 964
Words 167
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on September 15, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Martin

When I was 12 years old I read a short poem called "The Newt," After reading it I thought, "I can do better than that!" Thus began of poetry writing for the past 65 years, none of which has ever been published. more…

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