Analysis of Polluted Air
Life is truly unfair, why continue to breathe toxic air,
Why dare to care, singles versus pairs,
Prayers unanswered feels invisible, the pain can feel unliveable,
Why must the air I breathe be so thick & heavy, instead of light and merry,
Love and life uncertain and scary, my emotional state often buried,
Clearly my path is blurry, the war within is brutal & life begins to feel futile, will my energy fade to black,
This air is smothering, not mothering, nurturing wounds/nourishing wombs to nurturing tombs, This air consumes, will it be too my doom, Mushrooms alter thoughts am I even thinking or feeling, perhaps an expression of an ending,
This air has me always defending, love me only when I'm trending/bending/giving, its a message im sending
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Metre | 111001101011101 111110101 1101010001111 110111111100111010 1010100101010011010 10111100101110101111011100111 111100110010011001110011101111111101011110101100110101110 111110101110111010101010110 |
Characters | 760 |
Words | 135 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 8 |
Lines Amount | 8 |
Letters per line (avg) | 75 |
Words per line (avg) | 16 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 597 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 129 |
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