Analysis of Four Word Rhyme
Jase Lucero Pinski 2003 (Great Falls)
Please do not say
That every single day
Is all a waste
It's just a taste
Of more to come
Cue to the drum
As if a song
But not as long
Plus without a beat
With lyrics I cheat
Flowing through my head
Morning, night, in bed
RHYMES hard to think
Mind pushed to brink
Onto paper it goes
Professional art it shows
Take away which line?
People say it's fine
But they just lie
Perfect not only try
My life stands still
Head starts to fill
Hundred pages I wrote
No reason to gloat
Happiness can't be bought
Reality is just a thought
We can live here
No death or fear
They live their own
Where problem's another stone
Having to carry around
Poems a lovely sound
Take time to think
Poetry's the missing link
What do you know
Your minds to slow
Poet's thoughts come fast
Never come in last
Certainly not the best
Up for the test
Nothings off my mind
Life's not that kind
Look into the sky
Thoughts farther than "fly"
I am extra unique
Poems past its peak
Now to say hi
Poet's never say goodbye
Copyright © Jase Pinski | Year Posted 2021
Scheme | AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLXXXXMMNNGGOOPPQQRRJJSSJJ X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 1100101 1101 1101 1111 1101 1101 1111 10101 11011 10111 10101 1111 1111 101011 0100111 10111 10111 1111 011101 1111 1111 101011 11011 100111 101101 1111 1111 1111 1100101 1011001 100101 1111 10101 1111 1111 10111 10101 100101 1101 10111 1111 10101 11011 111001 10111 1111 101011 1011110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 991 |
Words | 202 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 48, 1 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 409 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 101 |
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Submitted on January 29, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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