Analysis of Untitled#16

Jeremy Beacham 1979 (Tesax)



She's not you
She could never be you
She thought she occupy the entirety of my heart
But she only occupies a piece of my heart

See,every since you and I parted ways
I find myself reflecting on our better days
Days when we couldn't stand to be away from each other
Days when we were fortunate just to have one another

But it's funny how how time moves forward fast
And what we had is just a memory in the past
And if so,why can't I love her more than I love you
And why dose my heart continue to cry out for you


Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111 111011 1111000100111 11101001111 11101101 111010110101 11110111011110 11101001111010 11101111101 0111110100001 011111011111 0111101011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 499
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted by jeremy_b on February 15, 2021

Modified on April 10, 2023

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