Analysis of Crust

Robert Schultz 1964 (California)



We live on the crust of molted metal
A film upon a puddle
Are we here by luck
I don't really give a care.
I know as a human
I want to live
Stop all the fighting
It's time to give.
Do you like living
I know i do
We have to leave this crust
Or we are through
Work on a travel
With all of our bags
Get on our ship
Or we're all had
Leave all our negative
Our fears our doubts
Our whining our crying
Our doing without


Scheme AABCDEFGFHIHAJKLGMFN
Poetic Form Etheree  (45%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 111011110 0101010 11111 1110101 111010 1111 11010 1111 11110 1111 111111 1111 11010 111101 11101 1111 1110100 101101 10101010 101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 397
Words 91
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 317
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Submitted by Knobster on February 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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