Analysis of people pleaser



i cant kill myself
i dont wanna die
i wanna taste the rich flavors of the world
and feel alive

i want the world to stay still
just a minute to find some peace
but even if it did
there is no way i could burden the ones l'd leave

tragically ironic
that the only reason keeping me alive
is part of why i want to die

no matter how selfish i am
consumed by my own demons
there is always that voice in my head
a stubborn disagreement

during my last breath
i'd still be thinking about someone else
prioritising their happiness over mine
thinking of pleasing them
even as i die


Scheme XAXB XXXX XBA XXXX XXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11101 11010110101 0101 1101111 10101111 110111 111111100111 100010 10101010101 11111111 11011011 0111110 11111011 0100010 10111 111100111 11100101 101101 10111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 555
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 4, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on March 06, 2021

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Liz-Maria Jose

21 year old living in Switzerland. I like to write about things that affect my life. Things I keep to myself to avoid chaos. more…

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