Analysis of Celeste‘s Will



If I lose my sight
Feel the sun but not the light
See the world for me

If I lose myself
Gone insane and lost my mind
Please be you for me

If I lose my grip
Something lost that I let slip
Keep your hold on me

If I lose my way
Go and save the world alone
Then come back for me

If I lose my life
I leave everything to you
Rule the world for me

If I lose my life
Live your own and don’t look back
Please remember me


Scheme aab xxb ccb xxb Dxb Dxb
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1011101 10111 1111 1010111 11111 11111 1011111 11111 11111 1010101 11111 11111 111011 10111 11111 1110111 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 397
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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