Analysis of A Blue Moon In The Middle Of June



hold on
all i wanted
to say was..
go on
they're waiting
you should go
moments regretted
should be forgotten

its been a while
its nice to seeeing you again
i forget what it was like
before i was sick to the core

old me?
oh please..
part of my disease
its nice talking to you again
its nice to know you stayed the same
what a shame..
i went along with the change

well enough about me
how about you
what have you been doing lately?
oh thats nice..
she always did give good advice
and she always knew how to make things right

go on
they're waiting
you should go
hold on..
i'm fading..
i think..
you should know..
go on...
they're waiting
you should go


Scheme AxxABCxx xdxx effdggx exehhx ABCAbxcABC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Metre 11 1110 111 11 110 111 10010 11010 1101 1111101 1011111 01111101 11 11 11101 11101101 11111101 101 1101101 101011 1011 11111010 111 1111101 011111111 11 110 111 11 110 11 111 11 110 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 613
Words 128
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 7, 6, 10
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on October 26, 2015

Modified on April 18, 2023

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