Analysis of A Bottle in Hand




I lay on the ground and cried.
Why, oh why, did I have to die?
I saw it happen before me.
It was the only thing I could see.

Watching it caused me much pain.
I was driving too fast in the rain.
With a half full bottle in my hand.
No way I would miss the band.

My mind it could not grasp.
It all happened way too fast.
The car just slammed into a tree.
And in that, it was the end of me.

I rose off the ground and cried.
Why, oh why, did I have to die?


Scheme aBcc ddee xxcc aB
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 11111111 11110011 110101111 1011111 111011001 101110011 1111101 111111 1110111 01110101 001110111 1110101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 438
Words 101
Sentences 14
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 25
Font size:
 

Submitted by Brokenoifvet on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 21, 2023

30 sec read
7

John Lowe

I rode as a bullrider on the pro rodeo circut for several years.I also was deployed to Iraq four times during OIF and was injured 3 times.My poems come from the heart break of being apart and the love of what I do and have done. more…

All John Lowe poems | John Lowe Books

6 fans

Discuss this John Lowe poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A Bottle in Hand" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 8 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/64093/a-bottle-in-hand>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    John Lowe

    »

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    22
    days
    8
    hours
    25
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    What animal did Robert Burns call "Wee, sleekit, cowrin, tim’rous beastie"?
    A Sparrow
    B Mole
    C Spider
    D Mouse