Analysis of A Man in Waiting



All that is left to you
is empty fantasy
while I grow fat with seed
you lovingly planted in me.

It was you who sowed,
tilled, fertilized and plowed.
Earth Mother keeps you in taut suspense,
As you await without tactile sense.

My womb soil turns,
areates and rakes
waiting for the day
my water breaks.


Scheme XAXA BBCC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111111 110100 111111 11001001 11111 11001 110110101 110101101 1111 101 10101 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 289
Words 56
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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