Analysis of Awakening in the ignorant night



AWAKENING IN THE SLEEPING NIGHT
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In the core of my soul
I live in the placelessness of the place

That is unchangeable,
Unbreakable ,unseen and untouched

And I long for your
Endlessly,Eternally,Enduring
Affinity of infinity
Abiding the Tenable,
Durable and deathless
Being the whole part
Of Time and Space

Carefree,everlasting and perpetual youth
In never languishing placeless of the place

Like a roamer roaming in the floating shade
Tracing that traceless roots of the rootless

Like migrating bird of passage
Bathing in the melting snowflakes

There my heart and my soul dip in
Streaming symphony of your soul.

Awakening in the sleeping night
Forgetting ignorant sleep
Relaxing in your Enlightened lap,

~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~


Scheme A bc bx xxxxcxc xc xx xx xb Axx x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 010000101 1 001111 11001101 111 010001001 01111 1 010010100 0100100 10001 10011 1101 1001001 0101001101 1011000101 101111010 1101110 1000101 11101110 10100111 010000101 0101001 010010101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 728
Words 118
Sentences 2
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 7, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 11, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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