Analysis of BAD HAIR DAY (Poem #207)



I got up early morning and
while starting out to dress,
I noticed in the mirror
that my hair was quite a mess.
But out I have to hurry
with no time to get a crop,
So I fuss with combs and brushes
as I try to untangle this mop.
As I'm pulling and a tugging,
a promise do I make
To get to a hairdresser tomorrow
before I need a rake.
But today I have to bear with it
and that is just that,
So I'll just have to deal with it
by putting on a hat.
 


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHIHJKJK
Poetic Form
Metre 11110100 110111 1100010 1111101 1111110 1111101 11111010 111101011 11100010 010111 11101001 011101 101111111 01111 11111111 110101 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 99
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 99
Font size:
 

Submitted on July 13, 2013

Modified on April 24, 2023

30 sec read
17

Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

All Jean Gorney poems | Jean Gorney Books

0 fans

Discuss this Jean Gorney poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "BAD HAIR DAY (Poem #207)" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 30 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/66435/bad-hair-day-%28poem-%23207%29>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    1
    day
    18
    hours
    44
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Shall I compare thee to a summer's _______?
    A dream
    B night
    C ray
    D day