Analysis of Darkness Comes

Jessikah Bailey 1988 (United States)



my bleeding heart runs over
a rip turned into a hole
as much as its taken of my heart
its taken even more of my soul
pieces lost, the puzzle left undone
it seems i'll never love again
too many strings left untied
too many things left unsaid
instead of being in this hell
i would rather be dead
not feeling anymore
nothing at all can heal this sore
wanting to rewind
to turn back time
needing your love and warmth
to keep me on this earth tonight


Scheme ABCBDEFGHGIIJKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 0110101 111110111 110101111 101010101 11110101 1101101 1101101 01110011 111011 11001 10111111 10110 1111 101101 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 430
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 356
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Submitted by jessikah_b on October 07, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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