Analysis of Diamond script of imperishable



DIAMOND SCRIPT OF IMPERISHABLE
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 You are my bridge between seen and unseen
 Like the broad smile on the two ends of  my lips

You have a language but I do not have any alphabet
 I am trying to write a poem with letter of every moment

I am trying to translate the diamond script of imperishable time
 Without obstruction to see the flower where his mouth awakes

I do not want to fall like a child who has just learned walking
 i want to run smooth like the trained soldier on the road of life

Now fear of a life evaporates as star loses light on the sunrise
 The Truth is that alphabets have mercy box of tears and smiles

But your name presses my thoughts as sky presses the round trees.
And I adore your name like a  child desires at sea, to always be free


Scheme X XA XX XA XX XX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 1 1111011001 10111011111 11010111111010 111011010110110010 11101010101111 01010110101111 111111101111110 111111011010111 1110101011101101 0111111011101 11110111110011 010111101010111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 797
Words 150
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on July 07, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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