Analysis of Discoveries



If I set my mind to things
I can realize a lot
miracles I don't do
because I am not God

When I reach a goal in life
I am very pleased
cause it asks commitment to
hard work before it's seized

A few of them stay nearby
a chance to grow more into it
mixed with a certain diligence
it's something I can transmit

So at the time when my life
 is coming to an end and I
can look back on the things
whith a smile, all ready to ascend

I leave a part of me behind
for the newborns in this world
and everything that is prepared
has a time and place to be unfurled


Scheme AXBX CDBD EFXF CEAX XGXG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1111111 111001 100111 011111 1110101 11101 1110101 110111 0111111 01111011 11010100 1101101 1101111 11011101 111101 101110101 11011101 101011 0101101 101011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 533
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by Jet-Rood on July 27, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jet Rood

2023: In a world full of chaos, creativity is one of the helping things to keep yourself sane. ******************************** 2014: A good head and a good heart are always a formidable combination. But when you add to that a literate tongue or pen than you have something very special. - Nelson Mandela - ******************************** I am from the land of tulips and mills. Writing is a need like eating and sleeping. I think we are all wondrous creatures who deserve to love ourselves and live in freedom. I like to participate in cases which can make a difference for myself, my surroundings and the earth. My wish: humanity in a non-dualistic society. more…

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