Analysis of Forsaken



Now that he is gone, the world will

be lost, they put him on a tree, not

counting the cost.

Spitting and ridicule, was their

aggression, he suffered and died for

them, no question.

They did not believe, that he was

the savior, crown of thorns, beatings

was their behavior.

His father looked down, he turned

away, the son was dying, the sky

Out of death, the promise fulfilled

to everyone his love, the spirit

hells power was no more, the keys

taken, he assended on high, to just


Scheme X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111011 111111011 1001 1001011 010110011 1110 11101111 01011110 11010 1101111 010111001 11101001 11011010 11011101 10111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 499
Words 94
Sentences 6
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on March 06, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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john aaron green

Writing, Sharing the gift of god...I was born in oklahoma, and work for myself, i really love learning about writing, and love to be creative. I believe if you are faithful in the small things you recieve the large things. I love reading poetry and short stories.... just wanted to write and tell a story of love and redemption...please review and comment if you can. And thanks for all the reviews thus far... ctrdreams@gmail.com more…

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