Analysis of Fractured Dreams



Fractured Vertebra without a mentio

A diagnosis forever enamored in infamy

An injury that left me in emotional lingo

Football aspirations now spiraled into self misery

All it took was one lift of the weights

Lifetime of hard work was rendered in vein

Days accompanied by back ache and tear filled nights

A four year olds' dreams drove a grown man insane

NFL dreams were now another source of life's nightmare

Football, my sanctuary, opened up to realities quandaries

Another shortcoming sent me into deep depths of despair

Made me doubt my existence in sad self inquires

The thought of the NFL once made me gleam

But a fractured vertebra, fractured my dream


Scheme X A X A X B X B C X C X D D
Poetic Form
Metre 101000101 00100100100100 11001110010010 1010110011100 111111101 111111001 101001110111 01111101101 11010101111 11100101110100 01010110111101 1111010011010 011011111 10101001011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 644
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on April 30, 2011

Modified on April 06, 2023

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