Analysis of Given hair



Her hair long, thick and full
the sun caress her locks
makes it shine like gold
she looks at herself in the river

Enjoying herself for a while
the sun starts to fade
slowly she walks back
at home going upstairs

She feels really lucky
with this gorgeous hair
specially because
it is not really hers

She sits down before the mirror
sighs and looks at herself
before she takes of her wig
seeing herself, a baldhead girl

Tomorrow the last chemotherapy
she's getting better now
so hopefully it grows back
before her time has come


Scheme XXXA XXBX CXXX AXXX CXBX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 011101 010101 11111 111010010 01001101 01111 10111 111001 111010 11101 10001 111100 11101010 101101 0111101 1001011 01010100 110101 1100111 010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 505
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by Jet-Rood on July 28, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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