Analysis of Guilty Conscious



I can't recall,
My guilty conscious...
Coming into play.
No matter what it say,
I did it my way
I see the agony on peoples faces.
The ones I loved, no not to make purchases!
My love is free and it roams freely,
On this enchanted, coast.
Where I avoid things, and take another dose.
My eyes are close. Angels on my eyes!
I breathe the dust. That told me to hide
Everything that's good I hide.
I hurt the ones I love, but I feel I can't decide
Stuck in between, and lean towards things,
That made me feel someone has taken my pride.
I achieved nothing, by this guilty conscious I can't recall.
I can't choose sides, therefore I'm beaten by it all...


Scheme ABCCCDDEFGHIIIJIAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11010 10011 110111 11111 11010011010 01111111100 111101110 110101 11011010101 111110111 110111111 101111 110111111111 100101011 1111111011 10110111010111 11111110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 630
Words 125
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 489
Words per stanza (avg) 125
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Submitted on March 03, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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