Analysis of I just...



Love came by us in a way I have
never felt beefore.

Like a color tone we matched, no doubt.

We did the best we could, we did
everything I would ever have dreamt about.

Still our colors would just not dry together
My eyes remain wet.

You still are the one on my mind
when ever the sun-set.

Candles and soft music wont do the test.

In my dreams I beg for your return
so my heart could rest.

But When I wake up I remain in our
current stream of distance.

It never will pass. I always will be
flying in our jetstream of passion.

Because I know that you still love me.

Your's for eternity,


Scheme XA B XB AC XC D XD AX EX E E
Poetic Form
Metre 111100111 1011 101011111 11011111 1011101101 110101111010 11011 11101111 110011 1001101101 011111101 11111 11111101010 101110 110111111 100101110 011111111 110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 567
Words 118
Sentences 12
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on October 19, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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