Analysis of I'll Not Deny in Sucrose Blinds



Did I coat each vocal in caramelised characters,
rotting the teeth through you?

Did my shovelling each prose of daily demons,
prove light labour to you?

Maybe morbid monsters should presently perk,
does that please perculiarly to you?

Maybe nail nostalgia in display for all attending,
does it appeal apathetically to you?

Perhaps a sordid story, oft grim and sometimes gory,
would such raport rate well with you?

Perhaps a reminded rue, to haste and ransomed hue,
would rare denotes deem fair with you?

But sweetness not this sucrosed painting,
and fairness failed your annotations.

But I'll dispel the random redes noting,
and noxiously naming your gloating.


Scheme XA BA XA CA XA AA CB CC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111001100 100111 1111111010 11111 10101011001 111111 10101000111010 1101111 01010101100110 1111111 010010111011 11011111 11011110 01011010 1101010110 0110110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 645
Words 107
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 18, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jessie Ní Leacaí

I'm an Irish speaker, Belfast based. I design hats and headpieces in the wonderful art of millinery. I enjoy science, culture,art, music and have an affinity with the sea. I use 'big words' so invest in a dictionary when reading my poetry. I tolerate no ignorance more…

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