Analysis of Illusion



Once we were together.
I thought it would be forever.
But you surprised me and went too far.
Opening my soul and leaving an ugly scar.
Like a grape that falls off the vine.
I am moving along, leaving you behind.

With harsh words you tried hard to even the score.
But now you cannot hurt me anymore.
‘Fore I have learned time after time.
That love is just an illusion that hate hides behind.


Scheme AABBXC DDXC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 110010 11111010 110110111 100110101101 10111101 11100110101 11111111001 111101101 11111101 1111101011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 383
Words 75
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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John Lowe

I rode as a bullrider on the pro rodeo circut for several years.I also was deployed to Iraq four times during OIF and was injured 3 times.My poems come from the heart break of being apart and the love of what I do and have done. more…

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