Analysis of Inching



Moments like this flicker
Like a candle at the seashore.
We did not know how long it would last.

There they were: embraced,
Moving side to side
On the embankment
That overlooks the interstate.

The long grass tickled my mother's knees;
My father's cheek grew red.

They spoke in whispers
That the sweeping clouds enveloped
And stole away from us.

Their quiet moment:
Disturbed only by the
Gaze of two small daughters
As we got closer.

We were inching,
Climbing higher up the hill
To get a better look.


Scheme AXX XXBX XX CXX BXCA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101110 1010101 111111111 11001 10111 10010 110001 011101101 110111 11010 10101010 010111 11010 011010 111110 11110 1010 1010101 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 481
Words 89
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 2, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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