Analysis of Life's not Promised!



I'd like to ask you somethings
about what life has offered you
the ice,the cars,those things
they really don't mean one thing
what does it mean to gain the world
and in the end lose your soul
I think I tought to let you know
that these things don't last.
Life's not promised to anyone
Live today and love someone
Don't live life so critical
make room for your miracle.
I want to live my life
love you still I die.
You are great person and I
prayer that God take the fear
way from you.So you can
open up to me.


Scheme ABACDEFGHHIIJKKLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 01111101 0111 1101111 11111101 0001111 11111111 11111 1110110 101011 1111100 1111100 111111 11111 1111001 111101 11111 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 492
Words 105
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 396
Words per stanza (avg) 102
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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