Analysis of Low Winter Sun



Golden light bathes the trees,
 it mingles through naked branches
 touched softly by the frigid breeze.
 Perpetual twilight hangs in the air
 promising darkness will soon be there.
 Until then, it's only a whispered threat,
 making one ponder with too much regret,

"What hasn't been done in the shortness of light
 that could have been done
 before the day takes flight?"

Now darkness draws near, the sun cries out
 like a newborn infant, screaming to live,
desperately, a shout.
 The sun fights in bright amber glory,
 struggling to finish its epic short story,
 "Finish the day", it cries, "as it began,
 in long shadows and promises
 of a long life at hand."


Scheme ABACCDD EXE FXFGGXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 11011010 11010101 010011001 100101111 0111100101 1011011101 11011001011 11111 010111 110110111 1010101011 100001 011011010 100110110110 1001111101 0110100 101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 646
Words 114
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 3, 8
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on January 29, 2016

Modified on March 12, 2023

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