Analysis of Midnight Rendezvous



You’re thieving the space between us with want across your face
as I’m shadowed by the darkness, the candle light and lace.
You quietly conquer all of me as the heavens have the stars
and I’m sure there’s been no lovers’ dance that’s anything like ours.

Night is softly tempted by the moonlight at your window,
silence sweetly broken by both our need to let it go.
Morn will sneak in jealously to force our break away,
but I won’t mind forgetting time to relive last night today.


Scheme AAXX BBCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11001011110111 11101010010101 1100101111010101 011111101110110 1110101011110 101010111011111 11101001110101 111101011011101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 486
Words 88
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jana Satterlund

I wrote my first poem at the age of 10. Although I enjoyed reading and writing poetry, I didn't truly appreciate it until a few years ago. At 21 I started really writing for myself as a release. It has surely become my escape, my late night ritual, my confession. I feel honored to be a part of this community where so many talented poets come together. I appreciate any sentiment and am elated at the opportunity to comment on so many beautiful pieces! more…

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