Analysis of Missing you mommy



I know you can't hear me,
in the heavens way up above,
But I'm sending you this message,
with unconditional love.

It seems like forever,
Since you've gone away,
But your always on my mind,
and thought of every day.

What I wouldn't do,
To see your smiling face,
to hold you close to me,
to feel your warm embrace.

Theres a part of me thats empty,
A space that can't be filled,
Its only when I sleep at night,
I can dream your with me still.

I love you and miss you dearly!


Scheme ABXB XCXC XDAD AXXX A
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 00101101 11101110 101001 111010 11101 111111 0111001 11101 111101 111111 111101 10111110 011111 11011111 1111111 11101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 455
Words 94
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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