Analysis of moment in time



As I gaze upon the comets path
My heart is filled with pain
Knowing she can see it too
My soul begins to rain
I pray she sees the path I see
Looking upon the stars
The comet streaks across the sky
I dream she's not that far
From were I'm at I'm all alone
She may be gazing too
A moment we will share
Together without you
As you look up in the sky
You should know that I can see
The time that we've been missing
This time thats dear to me
This space that comes between us
Time will only tell
The trueth of how I feel inside
Is why the comet fell


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Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 525
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 425
Words per stanza (avg) 116
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Submitted on August 26, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joe fritz

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