Analysis of Moments



sometimes things are ok,
at others they are fun,
sometimes warm and comfy,
at others they do burn.
but we evolve to be free,
evolve from ground below,
to rise up to the one,
who holds us for we know.
there are moments of pleasure,
moments of pain around.
thorns are the teacher,
 they are stewn on the ground.
yet there is mercy,
there is eternal joy,
there is a hand to hold us
when we rise after a fall.
moments of life are fleeting,
at dusk;  the birdz off for rest,
but moments of love and goodness
ensures us the best...


Scheme ABCDCEBEFGFGCHIJKLIL
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 011111 110111 011010 110111 1101111 011101 111101 111111 1110110 101101 11010 111101 11110 110101 1101111 1111001 1011110 1101111 11011010 01101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 506
Words 102
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 401
Words per stanza (avg) 103
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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