Analysis of Mother and Daughter Offered Up



We gained membership.We gained power.We gained one foundation.My daughter is offered up into my life.Shes my heart.Shes my savings.I applied everything into her life so she can dwell in that warm comfortable place in me.Shes my bright princess and Im her queenly mom taking care of everything in her that wants to be lost.God chose her for me and I chose to love from the start all the way to the finish with no hesitation.All my moments became hers and im glowing every day because my lil girl captured all my attention and we both became blessed together.She landed in my soul and I sat down in her spirit to advance strength in her everyday.My offer today no one can complete my purpose like my daughter can.Im holding her close with all my love.


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Characters 749
Words 146
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 603
Words per line (avg) 134
Letters per stanza (avg) 603
Words per stanza (avg) 134
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Submitted on September 02, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joe Kelly

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