Analysis of My Muse..



Hello there my beautiful muse
have i told you the wonderous news?
The thought of you causes devistation
a glance of you causes overwhelming frustration

You hold my heart, knowing easily you can tear it apart..
your wicked gaze has caused me to weigh
my way of dismay!

I hold your heart as you hold mine
back and forth we toss emotion
causing stress and heartache and devotion...
The truth, it slips as it lies on our lies of elopement...

You make a promise, yet you cannot keep...
I wain and want not for you but for your thought
Silently crying always lost in not...

Your eyes my door, your soul my mate...
Oh my muse do you not see the wonderous news?
Have you not caught my wish, my prayer, my hint?
Oh my muse, my beautiful muse all this is, is my way...
to say I love you...


Scheme AABB CDD BBBC XXX XAXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111001 1111011 0111101 011110010010 111110100111101 110111111 11101 11111111 10111010 101010010 0111111110111 1101011101 11011111111 100101101 11111111 1111111011 1111111111 11111001111111 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 761
Words 150
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 3, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 30
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

45 sec read
3

Jeremy Cook

I base all of my writing on personal experiences... more…

All Jeremy Cook poems | Jeremy Cook Books

0 fans

Discuss this Jeremy Cook poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "My Muse.." Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 9 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/79576/my-muse..>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    21
    days
    21
    hours
    2
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "The Road Not Taken"?
    A Emily Dickinson
    B Walt Whitman
    C Robert Frost
    D Langston Hughes