Analysis of No One Decides These Things



Once, when she was four years old,
she took the hand of her father
and stepped over the puddles left
in the potholes from the rainstorm.

One puddle was underneath an exhaust pipe.
It shone with oily colors; swirls of red, yellow, green.

"Daddy, I see a dead rainbow."

Her father clutched his heart
because it was such a beautiful thing
for her to say.

The years have gone fast.

Here she is now,
thirty-one years old, trying
to breathe new life into a dead bird,
mouth to beak,
with her own small son watching
very carefully.


Scheme XXXX XX X XAX X XAXXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 11011010 01100101 001101 1101011011 1111010111101 1011011 010111 0111101001 1011 01111 1111 1011110 111101011 111 1011110 10100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 508
Words 98
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 1, 3, 1, 6
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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