Analysis of Not Perfect



I'm not perfect,
I'm not kind.
I'm hard to get,
I'm not blind.

I'm just a man,
With no mind.
I'm of sand,
I'm hard to find.

But I'll be dead,
Like everyone dies.
I'll be on your bed,
See me with your eyes.


Scheme XAXA XAXA BCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101 111 1111 111 1101 111 111 1111 1111 1101 11111 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 194
Words 44
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on August 23, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mohamed Azumee

I liked to be called a poet or a lyricist. I attempt to explore and find out my true potential, for every day is a day one learns. I like to write what I feel mostly, surely words are felt from the mind and heart. I hope you enjoy my work. Feedback is always welcome. Some poems are very old since they were archived from the old site. Kudos to Hall of Fame :)I am 28 now. I have been writing since I was 12 and a member of poetry.com so some poems that are old since 2000 or 2002 may sound childish but hopefully would be an enjoyable read. more…

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