Analysis of out of a crystal sea



body striated by sunlight through water
propelled by a kick you break the surface.....gasp....laugh...shout "FANTASTIC"

ashore we kiss..you taste of salt and drip drip drip...


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 011011101010 01111110111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 173
Words 29
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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