Analysis of Poem



Write on me, tell me your inner thoughts.
Sell yourself like you've been bought,
Fill the pen up with ink you ought... to

Write something people can relate
Let those words come to you, and to you congradulate,
Forget this life of sin, this is your nasty escape.

Let those demons out, call on them all eight
Put that fire behind your words not in front of the gate

A hidden message, behind this voice you've chosen
It was waiting to speak, but all of a sudden frozen.
You cannot use any weapon of destruction to bust it open.

Let's wait a bit as the time ticks on that clock,
Thinking so hard we didn't hear a knock

Poems that are expressed like a journal
Allow me to be formal.


Scheme XAX BAX BB CCC DD EE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111101 1011111 101111111 11010101 1111110111 0111111111001 1110111111 11100111101101 010100111110 11101111101010 11011010101011110 11011011111 1011110101 1011011010 0111110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 663
Words 130
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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