Analysis of Quiet



Quiet
A cacophony of silence
That is where I belong
Somewhere between sundown and sunset
Between the tides, the equator
The middle, the peace, the path
Alone, bereft and constant
Like the wind, or the water, the air or of fire
Awaiting something of nothing
Expecting someone in return
In lieu of myself
Shipped from a faraway place
To a return sender who keeps
Sending empty packages wrapped in fancy wrapping
A circle of smoke within a breeze
Or find me among a wisp of redwoods
My soul calmed and close to the earth
Let me breathe in the quiet solitude
Drinking it like water on a sordid day
In autumn, cool, quiet, leaves falling
That is where I belong

--Rob Roy Foresman 2009


Scheme xxAxbxxbcxxxxcxxxxxcA x
Poetic Form
Metre 10 00100110 111101 101101 01010010 0100101 0101010 1011010011110 01010110 0101001 0111 1101011 10011011 1010100101010 010110101 111010111 11101101 111001010 10111010101 010110110 111101 1110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 658
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 21, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 273
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rob Roy Foresman

I was a student of history in an educational setting, now I find myself adrift from the academia; sharing with the multitudes who might enjoy my passive writing about nature, spirituality and exploration. I appreciate this website, all the comments and mutual support it provides to the craft of writing. Keep on writing! more…

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