Analysis of Reality (ww1 1914-1918)



REALITY (WW1 1914-1918)

HOW WOULD YOU FEEL
OUT IN THE FIELD

trench foot
mortar bombs

ALWAYS ON THE ALERT
SOAKING, DRIPPING WET

bullets whistle
sirens wail

SLEEP AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM
HEARING, SEEING, FEELING EVERY SCREAM

gunpowder smoke
gunpowder smells

METAL FRAGMENTATIONS WHIZZING BY
HEARING, SEEING, FEELING BUDDIES CRY

razor barbed wire
blood seeping

YOUR EARDRUMS BLASTING, POUNDING SORE
KNOWING LONG AGO YOU COULD TAKE NO MORE

flames exploding
bodies exploding

EYES STINGING, SCRAPING LIDS
EVERY FINGER THERE, IF YOUR GOD FORBIDS
SHOUTING, BAWLING, BELLY CRAWLING
RED, RED MUD, GROWING POOLS OF WARMING BLOOD

just an arm

A HUMAN FACE IN YOUR GUNSIGHTS
KNOWING TO PULL THE TRIGGER ISN'T RIGHT
AND ALL FOR glory
end of story


Scheme X XX XA XX XX BB XX CC XD EE DD FFDX X AXGG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 101 1111 1001 11 101 11001 10101 1010 101 1101001 1010101001 101 101 101101 101010101 10110 110 1110101 1010111111 1010 10010 110101 10010111101 1011010 1111011101 111 0101011 1011010101 01110 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 708
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 1, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 43
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on March 04, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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