Analysis of Reality in Darkness



I was born about noon in the shade of magnolias
Wearing the rose-colored glasses of trust
Everything to lose, but still I flew higher
When I took that one fatal glance at the earth

You were born on a night without trees or spectacles
Aspiring to mediocrity and lacking in love
So I knelt on the ground with my knees in the dirt
And now I'm the same height as you

I know in my heart that you're all that I have
(I've lost my faith in sweet-smelling trees)
My rose-colored glasses have turned a dark gray
And my noon in the shade disappeared

It's hard to believe that it's worth it to lose
But I happen to know from experience
The wings of naiveté hold so few pounds
And land is more stable than sky


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110011010 1001101011 1011111110 11111101101 1011010111100 0101010001001 111101111001 01101111 11011111111 111101101 11101011011 01100101 11101111111 11101110100 01111111 01111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 683
Words 136
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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