Analysis of Repentance



Gasping for breath,beating
heart every last thread seems
torn apart consumed by mistakes,
over problems that exist
feeling the tears being hard
to resist after a prayer
words deep in grace going
to sleep with a tear stained
face waking up looking
around taking a breath,
yet making no sound
not an ounce of sadness
lef to endure God removing
the pain from you and it
feel so good thank you
Lord for your bless.
And thank you for John.
I love him very much.


Scheme ABCDEFAGAHIJAKLMNO
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1100111 10101101 1010101 1001101 1011001 110110 111011 110110 011001 11011 111110 11011010 011101 11111 1111 01111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 439
Words 86
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 366
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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