Analysis of Rise & Shine



Close to death so many times
So many scars to remind myself of the past
Still so young to say what I been through
Beatings and watching my dad dealing
How can one get out of this life?
 Praying every night
Just one shot is all I need
To prove myself that I can rise and shine
With the stars
FIghting hard to take my place in this life
Ain't no backing down for me
Going for all or nothing
Keeping my faith by my side
Just pushing forward down this road
Watching my world blow up around me
Burning my fuel to keep this train going
College is so close yet feels so far
Hard to believe all the hard work I put in
I may not be where I'm now but I'm working on it
Just look at the road I've been on
All the broken dreams and tears
The blood and sweat
There's a future for me
I know it
I feel it
So afraid of what to come next
But in the end
You can call me a fighter
I fought the odds and won the hand


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11011011101 111111111 100101110 11111111 101001 1111111 111111101 101 1011111011 1110111 1011110 1011111 11010111 101111011 10110111110 101111111 11011011110 1111111111011 11101111 1010101 0101 101011 111 111 10111111 1001 1111010 11010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 868
Words 191
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 699
Words per stanza (avg) 191
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Submitted on January 03, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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