Analysis of Salt



Just before sleep, we catalogued our uncertainties,
Nestled in the arms of what might have been:
Waves of possibility swamped our dreams.

Still, we thought, there would be a moment,
The coming together after years apart:
Cradled by this peace, we slept.

She opens the door, and there is an awkward pause:
Here, between beats of the heart and pauses of the clock,
A decade of moments and infinite paths converge.

Before she speaks, hand on the door, she looks up,
Smiling: her collar is open, and the light
Follows the smooth bone into shadow.

At that moment between the words,
while memory flashes through our veins,
It is the sum of her that dries my throat.


Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110100100 1000111111 1101001101 111111010 01001010101 111111 110010111101 1011101010101 0011100100101 01111101111 10010110001 10011011 11100101 1100101101 1101101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 645
Words 117
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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