Analysis of Shadow of my past



I have gone on with life and the years have been good you see
And yet today I wake up with thoughts of you and me.
I tried to stop the thoughts of you but instead they overwhelmed me
And like a broken levee the tears rolled unexpectedly.
In my thoughts I felt your touch as you stroked my hair and face,
laying in your big strong arms in such a sweet embrace.
I knew it wasn't real, though I wanted it to be
And I tried to fight the tears I cried so you I couldn't see.
Step back into the shadows to the memories of our time
Back to that September day when I was yours and you were mine.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 578
Words 122
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 457
Words per stanza (avg) 122
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Submitted on September 14, 2014

Modified on March 23, 2023

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