Analysis of Shakes



Lyin in my empty bed
thinkin how this could be foolin me
I'd like to be livin up
steada lyin here in my bed
Tryin to hide from rest again tonight
it used to be so cool
But now I got theses feelins
that I can't shake
I try to breath and take it away
but I want more and more
One of these days I'll lose the war


Scheme ABCADEFGHII
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 10111111 111111 111011 111110101 111111 1111101 1111 111101101 111101 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 299
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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