Analysis of She had another




When we met

I swear I was strong

Powerful and confident

As I plodded along

Things were great

We were flying high

Nothing could stop us

Said the look in my eye

Time moved on

and so did she

But she didn't tell me

Through the night

I told myself

Then every night

She would disappear

And it was lonely

Without her here

Slowly it dawned on me

-what was wrong

She had another

With my love song

She said she cannot-

So now she's walking

Out the door

I ask myself

What was it all for?


Scheme X A X A X B X B X C C D E D X C X C A X A X X F E F
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11111 1000100 111001 101 10101 10111 101011 111 0111 111011 101 111 11001 1101 01110 0101 101111 111 11010 1111 11110 11110 101 111 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 530
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 26
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 14
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jane Lomas

All poems included here are just first draft's. I hadn't written poetry for a few years, so to polish my art and find my muse I posted some quickly written poems on these pages so I could see your response. It has helped me by reading your reviews about my poems (all of which I have taken into consideration) all comments have helped me improve my work a great deal. Thank you. I realy enjoy reading all your poems. I find some very insperational, some very heart felt, some very deep, which has helped me to push myself and dig deeper. Very deep, on some occasions. So my own poetry has vastly improved- since I have joined this sight, it has certainly helps splur me on. Thank You for all your imput and replies, please keep it up. It has helped educate me and make me a better writer. So if you would like to read more of my poems (the ones I've taken time over, polished them, played with them, worked on them till they truly worked)for your pleasure I have now with confidence published my own book. A MEASUREMENT OF THE MIND, POEMS OF LIFE AND LOVE. its available on ebook at Amazon. Thank You. more…

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