Analysis of Snow flake



SNOW  FLAKE
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I am the snow flake

Want to melt in your lap

You are my sweetest song

I want to listen always

Nobody understand my soul

As you understand as you are me

Things,days,seasons  gone with the wind

But you float like Time swing

Enjoying your dance,laughter,mind celebration

Like performing natural meditation

You walk like the star in my night

Giving soft personal touch of wise light

Eliminating all the loads of the day

Making  comfort  bed and the pain away

You came in my life as Aphrodite

We enjoyed together all scene and sight

Now I want to dissolve in yourself

Eternally like the space in space in ourselves.


Scheme A A X X X X B X X C C D D E E B D X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 11 1 11011 111011 111101 111101 10111 11011111 11101 111111 01011010 1010100010 11101011 1011001111 0100101101 1010100101 110111010 1010101101 111101001 0100101010001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 648
Words 118
Sentences 2
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on May 03, 2023

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