Analysis of Soldiers Prayer



On bended knee I stop and pray.
I hope the lord can forgive me today.
For the sins I commented are not for me.
I did them so everyone can be free.

I could say I just followed orders.
But that's a lie we tell the reporters.
Give me strength to make it through.
Because sometimes I don't know what to do.

But I will just keep putting one foot in front of the other.
And try to be a good and helpful brother.
So show me what must be done.
And I will move on carrying my gun.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11011101 1101101101 10111001111 111110111 111111010 1101110010 1111111 0101111111 111111011011010 01110101010 1111111 0111110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 460
Words 99
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by Brokenoifvet on April 17, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John Lowe

I rode as a bullrider on the pro rodeo circut for several years.I also was deployed to Iraq four times during OIF and was injured 3 times.My poems come from the heart break of being apart and the love of what I do and have done. more…

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