Analysis of Still I Search The Skies



As my eyes search so far into the horizon
          so slow does the sun climb as I hear the
                   silence broken only by the birds...
         My own silent sigh of missing you makes
             seeing the beauty of dawn so unclear.

Tears of salt touch my dry lips as I fail to
                answer what I keep asking myself...
          Why did you have to take that final sleep
          when this breaking heart needed you here.

So long have I sat here by my open window
                         little bird in the cherry tree cries ...
          Did another little bird tell you there were no
                                                            goodbye's...
          The sunset now appears so sombre, afraid to
                                           leave me alone tonight...
           Big old moon weeps in silence, she sees me
                                                 friend ...I'll be alright.

Bobby Ferguson 01/07/2014.


Scheme AXBXX CXXX DXDBCEXE A
Poetic Form
Metre 111111010010 1110111110 101010101 1110111011 1001011101 11111111111 10111101 1111111101 111011011 111111111010 101001011 101010111101 1 0110111011 110101 1111010111 1111 10100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 984
Words 128
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 8, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bobby Ferguson

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